Would have looked nicer if you erased the orange line on her, that way it could have looked like it was flowing around her.
I do not really like it, the effects are not fitting with the render you used. Sorry. Add a b/w version please, it may looks better.
this would have been an ace with a better stock great effects, great colors, great depth too bad the stock is lq
ouch, text has got to go and composition is all over the place. depth is alright though, but it needs a little more of everything haha. not feeling it sorry.