Roger Waters

i love pink floyd =P

 

bump

 

There are two focal points. The render and the text.
Plus the background looks a bit messy to me.

 

No real flow. The text is taking away the focal, majorly. You also need to make the colors work better. They seem random and clashy.

Do some tutorials, hun. ^_^

 

I'd say take out the text and work on the colors. Not bad, though.

 

Crazy background and lighting is off. Though I give you props for making it about Pink Flyod, definitely one of my favorite bands!

 

Yep colors are off. The effects you have mess with the flow. Keep experiementing with different effects

 

not feeelin blurry style
needs a focal point