Abstract Wip

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by myles56k, Mar 24, 2008.

  1. Mar 24, 2008 at 2:21 AM #1
    myles56k

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    Need some input on it so far.

    Not much difference among the versions just slight lighting changes

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    new
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    v4.1
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  2. Mar 24, 2008 at 2:23 AM #2
    DarthSomething

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    Bit overcontrasted on this one. Work on the depth too. Try to give it some flow somehow.

    Keep working. You'll get it. ^_^ You got skillz. Hehe
     
  3. Mar 24, 2008 at 2:27 AM #3
    myles56k

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    Yeah ill fix the contrast on the left side.
    As for depth, how exactly do you do it. I've never really understood how to do it xD
     
  4. Mar 24, 2008 at 2:30 AM #4
    DarthSomething

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    Basics:

    Things in the foreground are sharper. Things in the BG are blurrier. Things in the foreground are a little brighter, while things in the background are a little darker. :)

    There are some tuts on depth I think. Not sure though.
     
  5. Mar 24, 2008 at 2:57 AM #5
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    Looks pretty cool. ^_^
     
  6. Mar 24, 2008 at 2:57 AM #6
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    Ok 1.1 new versions added :P
     
  7. Mar 24, 2008 at 8:13 AM #7
    diverseartist

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    scrap it.



    imo sersiouly everything that could go wrong is wrong.
    list:
    colors
    depth
    randomness
    lighting
    no depth again
    um bad
    um randomness again
    and more random
    contrast is horrible
    monotone as ------
    no flow from black sh to blue sh
    random green line in there
    its just a background and the background has no sense of flow and is random as hell once again
    random.


    IMO
    nothin u can do to fix it.
     
  8. Mar 24, 2008 at 10:18 AM #8
    myles56k

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    Um its abstract I wanted it to be random and not have flow :P
     
  9. Mar 24, 2008 at 5:23 PM #9
    Strykor

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    Diverse mentioned it.
    Maybe set some highlights, focal points with effects?
     
  10. Mar 24, 2008 at 5:28 PM #10
    DarthSomething

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    Diver, be nice. You're kind of being a pain the neck with your comments these days. = /

    Try and at least be kind. ^_^ It's not that hard. :D

    Myles, it's not as good as your other abstract that you made before with the warm tones in it.

    I actually think you got the depth to work. It looks kind of like the blue/black is a platform with holes in and light shining through the holes if you can visualize with me.

    I think that if you're going to have the green line, there should be more green in there than that. ^_^


    Random PS: HOLY CRAP I MISSED MY 1337 POST D:
     

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