Underwater

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  1. Strykor

    Strykor Well-Known Member

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    Here are the three versions I worked out,
    c&c please.

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    This is a new and original style. I have never seen anything at all like this in my entire life. Cutting edge!!!
     
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    Strykor Well-Known Member

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    Thanks for your comment. :D
    So it would be good to write a tutorial of this sig?
     
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    I've seen so many ----ty sigs using this render , but your the first I've seen actually pull it off : D
     
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    Thank you :D
     
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    Im gonna have to go against the grain on this one, im not feeling it.

    The way it washes away any detail from the render just isnt working for me.

    The left side where the needles stick out looks over sharpened/ bad cut.

    However, i do like the effects in the background and the right side flowws well. That style of lighting fits that. blur/ smudge background wel.
     
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    Looks a bit odd. I don't think underwater fits this. Maybe "Into the Storm" would be better.

    And the lighting seems unusual to me. I don't know why.

    Overall, pretty nice work, but it isn't my absolute fav, hun. ^_^
     
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    Okay,
    I felt the same thing about the left side, I will blur it tomorrow a bit more.
    I acutally wanted to put an underwater filter over it, that is why the title is like that, I changed my mind while creating. B)

    Thanks for the comments so far,
    any further opinions / critique?
     
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    Okay, had some time to blur it.
    What do you think now? Is it better?

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    Left side is good. Text is decent.
    The right side looks unfinished and looks noob.
     
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    What would you add to the right side?
    Thanks for your comments so far,
    any further ones?
     
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    v2
    the contrast is wierd tho
    specially on his head
     
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    Okay, I will try to fix that at my next work. :D

    Any further comments?
     
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    ~Bump~
     
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    Underwater --- its a fishie ?? a crab maybe ?

    Looks like a tornado - in an abstract sorta way ! its like really bright on the right side and really dark on the left side --- were you tryin to achive somthin like eternal's sig ? it kinda looks awkward -- too much contrast tone down the difference maybe

    OMG THERES TEXT !!
     

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