-yoshi-

trying to improve my c4d skills

version #2


version #3


Comments and Criticism is welcome. :mellow:

 

Looks nice.
but i dont like the text.
remove it !

 

The text takes away the focal point, move it, make it smaller or even delete it at all.
I like the way you used the c4ds, it fits with the flow, the depth is nice, too.

 

thanks for the comments!
i'll try to get a v2 of better text up soon.

edit: V2 is up! (location: original post)

 

background is pretty messy imo. but i'm probably biased though since i rarely feel any of the c4d sigs.
nice lighting and blending

 

No, i think you're right.
i kinda thought the bg was a little messy too.

thanks for the comment

 

BG needs to blend as one better. Take out the text, and don't make it rounded. If you do those things, I think I'll like it more. ^_^

 

Text is really bad but the rest is great.

 

compared to current one this is very better
keep practiing on positioningand composition
ghood job mahn

 

So all in all,
remove the text,
remove the rounded border,
erase messy parts of the c4ds.

Try that if you can.

 

ok... i'll try doing that.
I really do want text though, since I want to put that the work is mine.

edit: V3 is up now. no text, no rounded border, added 1 c4d, erased messy parts

 

V3 looks best, good work, I like it.

 

I like this sig! And Yoshi pwns!