Pretty good work. The text needs to fixed though. Other than that its a good tag. BTW, that shouldn't have been rejected. Its Zero Suit, right?
Well, the stock is from someone's art on DeviantArt & shouldn't have been rendered for use... but anyways, this could use some depth, but still decent nonetheless.
I've already seen a lot of people around render or use it, but yes, here's the original: http://transfuse.deviantart.com/art/Samus-Aran-44059164 I'm just mentioning this to you since the "stock" was being discussed and such, that's all - Not trying to be a pain to you.