I actually really like it. The squares on the left side are really creative, but they might be a bit harsh. Lower the opacity of them a bit.
the right side is a bit too bright and the FX are a bit too harsh as stated before. i like the text and i can see how you wanted this to come out, but i don think it worked out too well. better luck next time bud :]
Alright, thanks to all for the comments. As for the squares, they were just an experiment for my default techniques, so that's all about them.. Bao: Actually, I was going for the contrast and no actually, I don't think there's a need for a next time on this.