Kingdom Hearts

Hello there,
C&C please



I am still having problems with the text, what do you think?

 

very nice.....not much i can say except add more depth.....

 

How, with curves?

 

Burning, blurring, sharpening, etc.

Take out the white border. ^_^

I like it. Simple, smooth, clean. Nice work hun.

 

Thanks
I have some work here, when I finish I will try to add some depth.
Any further comments?

 

Okay, removed the white border and sharpened / blurred a bit, what to add/remove, comments please.


V1:
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V2:

 

Added two versions.

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What do you think?

 

Made three new versions to fill up the left place a bit,
comments and critique please which version your fav one is.
And what shall be changed.


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V1:
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V2:
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V3:
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V4:
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V5:
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V6:
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V7:
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V3 minus text I think.

Those last few versions, the smudging on the left is too rough and doesn't fit with the smooth flow of the right side.

 

Yes, thats what I thought too.
Anything to be added on the third version?

 

v4

 

Could you please say why?
And why not the others, a few reasons would be nice.

 

I kind of like v6 the most. maybe a little dark on the left side. I think the right side needs a little more though.

text looks ok. Don't be afraid to make it bigger, i guess.

 

lacks a focal point and everything is pretty plain, though nice composition and lighting
gj

 

Okay, thanks for mentaioning, I am trying to fix it with the next signature.