It's a tad bit boring.. Also, never place text on the face of your stock/render.. The face is usually the focal point and it just does not look right with text on his face. Since you used plain text, you should have covered it up or something. In this tag I made for someone.. I took plain text and hid parts of it, which gave it a really nice feel to it. I suggest you use C4Ds that demand attention, and place some clipping masks in as well. Hope this helps
