Agreed. The text way brought it down. Haha. I was like, "Oh how cute how pretty how sw- that text sucks!" :lol: I think just take out the text would be best. Good job on this one Ang3l. I like it. It's really cute and appeal to me, considering I'm a teenage girl. Go figure! ^_^
Maybe try using plainer text? Sometimes the best text comes from plain Sans font believe it or not. Adding little designs to the text like small hearts could also do the trick.
id love to see that as a LP and huge (400x700) cuz there is so much to take it well done on it, and indeed text in v2 is better.