Well I use gimp and I made this for a friend on another web sight, so yea post ur comments and plz don't be to harsh I'm a little new to gimp
well its o.k the renders is very smooth but the background is a tad plain and could use some more effects u also need to work on your text btw
Since you made it in gimp, i think it's pretty good. I think the render could be blended in a little better though 7/10
its clean, but simple. ur text can use some work, and thats always a hard part so don't worry too much about that the smoke looks good and like mentioned above the render is very clean, it could just use a bit more complicity ^^ keep practicing and posting ^_^
