Too blurreh. Lol. Take out some of the blur and/or sharpen it. Also, remove the text. The effects aren't too bad though. Pretty nice for 6 months. ^_^
I second and third their opinions....more so...I would've loved to see more people in the background and a highlight on her as if she was separate from the rest of the city....
Bascially what everyone else stated, sharpen the render and tone down the blur. Also have some lighting on the right of her face as opposed to the left side you have it on (slighty I think).