Sprite Signature

Hello guys,
I am pretty new to this forum.

I just wanted to know what you think about my recenet signature, here it is:

V2:
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V1:


What couldve be done better?



-Strykor

 

Save your sigs as PNG files instead of jpgs. PNG is hight qual.

Can you resave and post again? I can better tell what needs fixin with hq images. Rigth now it all seems grainy cause of the jpgness.

 

Okay,
Sorry it took so long, firefox crashed

V1:
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V2:

 

Much better quality.

Ok.I think V2 has the lighting better. However, the overall colors seem to clash with the sprite's red shirt. Also, the text is sort of taking away from the focal point. Make the text smaller, and take out the motion blur from behind it. Try and move it closer to the focal so it isn't so distracting, hun. ^_^

Overall, great effects you got going there. I would just tweak it a bit. Maybe use some gradient maps to sink up the colors too.

 

Okay,
Changed a bit around.
Here I go

Final Version?:

 

The text and those boxes kind of ruin what you had going......In my opinion, I 'm not feeling the huge cloud at his feet...I'd half it in size...but thats just me...LoL
Back to your text, try to place it differently, right now it seems as if its not meeting up with the flow of the sig and those boxes completely through it off....The sig works better without them....

 

v2
still lacks more on right side

 

Did not feel like adding a text, took a few changes, what about now?

 

ohh when i started doing gfx, i had tags like that
good memories

 

By the way, it is my first sprite signature so do not laugh at me

Any further comments / critique for improving?

 

~Bump

~No one?

 

Much better without text and whatnot. Good job. ^_^

 

Thanks