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  1. kirbir

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    Looks good. The lower planet could be improved in-terms of detail.

    Why is your name so big at the bottom? just slap it in a corner or make it smaller.
    At the moment it is saying "I MADE IT!!! ITS ALL MINE!!! ME ME ME!!!"

    I like the colours and style.

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    looks good . nice colors and contrast
     
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    The colors look great. Only concern for me would probably be how come there are stars in front of the top planet? It looks a bit odd just having them sit on top of it only in that one section. The stars are kind of placed weirdly too. Like to the top right of the bottom planet and also the top right of the top planet. But it looks good. Way better than I could do... >.<
     
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    haha thanks guys for the comments..

    My name so big? umm... i don't know >.< lol
     
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    Thanks hun :)
     
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    well its ok.. i think its too blurry for me.. there' is just something in that piece that doesnt fit/look good.. but good job still :D
     
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    <3 it!
     
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    Perfect.

    I love the little shooting star :P
     
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    Thanks for the comments guys :D
     
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    doesnt make sense to have stars infront of the planet, they'd be huge if they were that close so could do with adjusting them, and maybe adding some texture/definition to the planets but good so far
     
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    Thanks hun :)
     
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    TBH, i dont really like the texture and the clouds, The coloring isnt my taste either. I guess its an abstract coloring look. Not Bad.
     
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    :P Thanks sweetie
     

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