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Something slightly different. No smudging, no C4D's.
C'nC?

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Lol, old siggie is old

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I dont really see a focal point.
Kinda get lost looking at it.

 

Agreed with Am. I couldn't figure out what I was looking at. Then I found the sprite and got confused because I didn't know why it was there.

Work on your focal and placement. And the colors seem to not really go with the sprite, you know? Try to bring out the focal more, and maybe try a BW version too. ^_^

The effects are very interesting and schweet, but the compo is way off, hun.

 

Thanks. Anyone else? :]

 

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idk the compo is wierd
lol
i cant tell if hes riding something or wtf is happenin haha

 

composition is off ;p
better than your current though.

 

Lol, current is ancient. I think my last post here was about 1.5 years ago.

Anyway, thanks for the Criticism guys