Iron Man

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by Omega-Alpha, Mar 19, 2008.

  1. Mar 19, 2008 at 2:04 PM #1
    Omega-Alpha

    Omega-Alpha Well-Known Member

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    Trying out new things, 3 versions.

    total b/w
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    total color
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    b/w with c4d color
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    improved quality and color. depth is fine by me.
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  2. Mar 19, 2008 at 2:32 PM #2
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    I like the total color one best. But they could all do with more depth. Keep workin' at it
     
  3. Mar 19, 2008 at 2:34 PM #3
    HOLLAstir

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    Could use more depth and contrast. Change the text too <3
     
  4. Mar 19, 2008 at 3:47 PM #4
    DarthSomething

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    I think he's a bit oversharpened/choppy round the face. Keep working on it. :) Needs some more depth.
     
  5. Mar 19, 2008 at 5:19 PM #5
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    2 & 3rd are the best. does need a little more depth, and i'd move txt to bottom right
     
  6. Mar 19, 2008 at 5:26 PM #6
    Omega-Alpha

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    added new version, depth looks good to me, also the text.
     
  7. Mar 19, 2008 at 5:32 PM #7
    Strykor

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    V2 and V3 are really nice.
    The text is a bit hard to read, try to change it.
     
  8. Mar 20, 2008 at 12:04 AM #8
    TheKoolestBe

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    Text...is a problem....
    I like the colors and the simplicity....
     
  9. Mar 20, 2008 at 12:07 AM #9
    DarthSomething

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    Remove the text. It's not working.

    V4 is the best so far though. I think it would be better all BW, personally, or all color. ^_^
     
  10. Mar 20, 2008 at 12:08 AM #10
    Kiyaa

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    I prefer v4, nice work :)
     
  11. Mar 20, 2008 at 12:12 AM #11
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    v4 is the best one, and i love the text, don't know why but the text is just fine for me, gj
     
  12. Mar 20, 2008 at 8:02 AM #12
    diverseartist

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    remove typo
    canvas size throws it off a bit
     

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