Project 1999230

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by solarum123, Mar 18, 2008.

  1. solarum123

    solarum123 Well-Known Member

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  2. ikky

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    1- ... not liking it because its too empty.. ints not bad but nothing of the image looks like it fits, colour/shape/balance/tone/texture... these are fundamentals of ANY piece of art and they really are not shown in this piece.

    2- It hectic, far too much going on, and there is a lack of depth and blending.

    Try some full tag tutorials to get the basics down bro. GL.
     
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    basically these were more of experiment than nothing else.

    i need to adapt another style so yeah. experimentation is the way. btw if you can give me some tuts which you think would help me. feel free to pm me. XD
     
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    love love love the effects on the right side of #1. If you carried it over to the other side and added a bit more, it could be a great tag.

    The second one is a bit messy for my tastes.
     
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    thanks for that kiyaa. ^^
     
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    BUMPO!
     
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    firs one seems fine
    second one not liking so much the bg looks very repeatative nad makes it look boring
     

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