A bit dull. On each sides of the focal the colors are more dull than the rest of the sig, therefore making the focal less interesting. The sig could use a bit more contrast and an overall color balance. Maybe some more detail as well. Nicely done though, the concept is deep.
looks good, however, I think the lighting on teh 1st is best. but light on sides of 3rd is best. maybe lighten up sides of 1st like the 3rd, and keep the txt, ita be bout good as anyone could ask for...gj (hope what I said makes sense to you