Tylerdurden

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by TylerDurden, Mar 16, 2008.

  1. TylerDurden

    TylerDurden Well-Known Member

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    i followed a tut from another forum so here it is
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  2. DarthSomething

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    Oversharpened hun. = /

    And try to make him smaller on the canvas. Right now, he's big and smack in the middle, which makes flow hard and messes with the compo. ANd remove the text. ^_^

    I like your current on better, but keep tryin and keep doing tuts to learn new things! :D
     
  3. TylerDurden

    TylerDurden Well-Known Member

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    thanks for the advice im still a newb at this stuff so ill try that tomorrow its too late right now
     
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    Alright. Cant wait to see a v2, hun. :)
     
  5. solarum123

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    oversharpened and has fns(floating head syndrome)
     
  6. diverseartist

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    match the colors wtf wer u thinkin
    rest is nice
     
  7. TylerDurden

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    i added a v2 and a v3 i tried to fix everthing you guys said and on the third im just adjusting some of the colors
     
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    #1 is too blury, #2 looks alot better, but #3 is the best, and would look vg if the txt was diff...nj
     
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    I agree....Fixing the txt in the third version...will do it....
     
  10. Hershey747

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    i hate edge text. bring it closer to the focal, it takes attention away from the focal
     
  11. TylerDurden

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    i added v4 i brought the text closer to the focal and got rid of the border
     
  12. DarthSomething

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    I say take out the text completely. ^_^
     
  13. xSpitfire5o3x

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    yea im not liking the text but if you check out a dif font maybe itll help a bit or check out some font tuts.
    i think its pretty cool with the effect i like the third on the most out of them all though, keepin workin at it :D
     

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