Its So Tasty

C&C

 

I don't like the C4D placement, I also don't like the cyan coming from the bottom of the tag, I think it would look better if it were colored.

 

I'm not diggin the lighting or the tag size in ratio to the effects. The text should go, and try to create some more depth with blurring and sharpening different areas and darkening the bg. The sides of the tag are WAY oversharpened. Keep workin hun. Do some more tutorials and keep making tags. ^_^

 

fix the txt, maybe move the color behind her so it will lighten the dark spot where ur txt is, and ease the sharpen on the sides, keep workn

 

Everything they said basically...
-Bad choice of color either all black and white or add color to the whole image....
-The size of the sig should be brought down a little more....Allowing the eye to focus on the woman...which is your focal point...
-The text used should be changed and its placing as well should be re-thought....

You have an interesting idea...It just needs more work....

 

+ the text is bad.

 

not really feeling the cyan light
better to keep fully b/w

 

x2^
not not not not feelin blue
too big

 

Pretty much what everyone else has said. The blue doesn't really go well with it. I love the use of textures though.