Oversharpened hun. = / And try to make him smaller on the canvas. Right now, he's big and smack in the middle, which makes flow hard and messes with the compo. ANd remove the text. ^_^ I like your current on better, but keep tryin and keep doing tuts to learn new things!
i added a v2 and a v3 i tried to fix everthing you guys said and on the third im just adjusting some of the colors
#1 is too blury, #2 looks alot better, but #3 is the best, and would look vg if the txt was diff...nj
yea im not liking the text but if you check out a dif font maybe itll help a bit or check out some font tuts. i think its pretty cool with the effect i like the third on the most out of them all though, keepin workin at it