Wow, I was going nowhere with this for the longest time, then got rid of something and it got alot better. Anyway let me know if it's better than my current, I think it is v1 v2 CnC
I like it more than your current, the effects are nice and sutile. The typo is bland but it works. Colours are nice and warming(LOL) and has a nice flow to it.
Need to do something about the backdrop, IE change it so it's not solid black, it's taking a lot away from it. Stock of a city or something might work, if done well. Not bad though.
Well I tried a v2 with a city stock. Make sure to look closely before posting which one you like best because there may be flaws in v2 which aren't obvious at first, I know I've seen some. Well I posted it anyway
effects are nice, especially the door portion, v2 is better. Also imo, the cutting of the render is a little choppy/smudged, especially on the front top side. Though that could be from resizing.