Little Bit Of C&c

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by Who Dares Wins, Mar 11, 2008.

  1. Who Dares Wins

    Who Dares Wins Well-Known Member

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    Well, I made a couple of sigs for a couple of my mates who wanted them and I was wondering what you more-experienced designers might think of them, so some C&C would be much appreciated. Any comments on my current sigs would also be really appreciated.

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    Thanks

    -Dares
     
  2. MDproskater

    MDproskater Well-Known Member

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    First one looks good, and nice text imo. But I'm not sure what the focal point is in the tag. If it's the girl, try making her stand out more, and it would look way better. :)

    The Asassins one doesn't look that bad. I think there is too much white around the character, though. If you took away some of the lighting, and added some effects, it wouldn't look as empty.
     
  3. Fire Cooler

    Fire Cooler Well-Known Member

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    /\ i agree completely no focal on the first and the assasins creed one has too much empty space on the right but your text overall is good (better then mine) :D

    Arden
     
  4. Eksperimental

    Eksperimental Well-Known Member

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    The effects are nice on the first one, but like the first two said, no focal point. Your second one seems really empty. Both have good effects, and just need a bit of polishing.
     
  5. Kiyaa

    Kiyaa Well-Known Member

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    FX covers up the focal. It should be enhancing what you have already, not disguising.
     

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