Laotm ? | I Will Never Let You Down.

I like it !

Please tell me if any changes need to be made. & is it better than my Syndrom 913 for LAOTM ?








V222 :

 

bump..

 

Its really good mate, just im a little off put by the typo.

 

ahh yes this is good

 

It looks good lol it looks very good actually.


The typography is a major distraction to the rest of it.

I would either:

a) Get rid of it.
B) Calm it down and let the rest of the piece shine out.

plus the border is highly unattractive.

EDIT:

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I will repost it.

And should I put it for LAOTM instead of my Syndrom 913 ???

 

Is it any better with V2 ?

 

Much better.

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