You do not need to sorry my brother = ) i'm sorry if I have a little errors in English that because I from israel and I do not understand English so good. But I learn = )
The effects and the lighting are really nice, but I agree with Arden, no flow to the tag. Text could use a bit of work too.
GREAT JOB but just try to work on it a little bit more with colour but from that its your 1rst with that type so AWSOME JOB!!!!!!!!!!!
tnx bro. yes,i know. i have problem with the colors,i try to learn how to repair this problem with tutorials. tnx.