Dane Cook

Rate and C/C please. ^_^

v1

v2

v3

v4

v5

v6

v7

v8

 

Bumpity.

 

I think first one is best. It's all looking good except of the text above Dane Cook. Maybe you could change that.
NJ

 

v1 Definitely, but I'm not feeling the black stroke on the text above the Dane Cook text, maybe try something else with it.

 

Thanks guys. I'll work on the text and post another version.

 

v5 posted.

Text better? Or worse?

 

I like the text a lot more in v5 .
Also did you lighten the colors in v5 ?

 

Nope. I didn't lighten anything. Why? Do I need to add contrast?

Thanks for all comments!

 

Oh no it looks great. I just figured out that since I was slouching in my chair when I was looking at the different versions, the
colors at the top of my screen were darker than the ones at the bottom. So it looked like the colors were different :lol:

 

Oh ok. Lol. Thanks! You on a laptop? I have that problem with my notebook too.

 

Add some overall contrast. It seems really bland and lifeless. Maybe some more effects to the left of him, it seems a bit empty there. Nice though, I see you are putting some effort into this.

 

I saw what you meant there, so I made another version. Better or worse?

v6

 

Bump for v6

 

Yeah V6 is the best one IMO. Nice colors and text is way better.

 

i liked v4 better, i wish that stroke wasn't there in text, but gj overall