Hope

Halo siggy =D enjoy =D

 

I'm liking the right side, but not so much the left. It just doesn't seem to flow with the rest of it.
Also maybe make the color of "HOPE" match the color in MC's face shield.

 

its a nice tag, ^ is right , ill 2nd that

 

Ditto comments of myles there. Change the color of the text to a more orange color like the visor, and the left side needs work.

Also, you are rapidly improving. NO FAIR. I want your brother as a coach.

 

=) thanks

 

Bumpzzz

 

not feelin color
left side of render need more blending
remove all color or color it all good

 

Bump

 

The text draws away the attention, the left side is "anti-flow", it could need a bit of depth and the color is a bit too strong (of the helmet).

Blur the background a bit for some depth.

I like the concept, work on it.

 

Bump