Tree Of Life

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  1. 13d Lucidity

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    Not bad. Great thinking.

    - The planet or moon, should be smaller and positioned better. At the moment its screaming out "LOOK AT ME!!!!"
    - You need to improve the realism of the pyramids being on the sand.
    - The size of the elephants doesn't work and should be smaller.
    - The lion on the tree seems unnecessary.
    - The smoke on the far left bark needs working on too.

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    thanks
     
  4. Wamm

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    looks cool
     

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