Abstract Passion

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  1. Jord4n

    Jord4n Well-Known Member

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    Well its my first try at an abstract NO tuts watsoever just sheer creativity and experience cnc wanted thanks.

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    new version

    darkened a bit with 20% gradient overlay

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    and 1 last version

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  2. Snowy

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    Hmm... well, it's not too bad m8. I'm not sure if the text fits well, and I'd like to see some more color variation. Not bad for a first try. :)
     
  3. Jord4n

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    thnx yea i was just bored and i felt like doing something different wasn't expecting to do an outstanding job on first try but i think its decent
     
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    Not too bad for a first m8. I like the flow but I think you should add more color.. The sig looks a little LQ as well. But still good job for a first. I remember my first shot at abstract, it wasn't pleasant.
     
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    thnx yea i had fun making it and didnt take too long i will look at some tuts maybe
     
  6. diverseartist

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    monotone
    random
    looks cramped into a small canvas
     
  7. Jord4n

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    random? its abstract lul and i think left side is nice but right side is not so nice agree?/disagree? i like ur honesty unlike some others diverse thanks for being foward and not going " nice effort" and such i really need hard criticism to become better so i appreciate it
     
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    new version is it better? or worse?
     
  9. Jord4n

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    bump i really want comments/feedback/criticism on new version i think its better..
     
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    i like the look and concept, jus a little too bright imo!!
     
  11. Jord4n

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    hmm ok any 1 else think its too bright? i never noticed i thought it was ok
     
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    bright...eh.....reduce the orange jus a smidge...i couldn't think of anything else to call it....sorry...lol
     
  13. mideumjhung

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    cant see the abstractness of it
     
  14. Hatton92

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    yeah for a first go at a style its mint but its kinda mono-coloured.
     
  15. Jord4n

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    cant see abstractness of it uh.....where else did u see something similar ._. its not farfetch'd abstract its just alittle but i like it
     

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