New sig, it's a bit different than I normally do, I just wanted to try out some darker sigs recently. CnC
The focal is confusing. I thought at first, "well it must be that girl" but then I looked at it a few times fresh, and I was drawn to the over-sharpened effects on the right. Maybe sharpen HER, and blur the effects a bit? Your light source is really quite obviously a soft-brush, which is sort of a pet-peeve of mine, but hey, sometimes it's unavoidable. Try making lighting through layering and different burning of areas, and then a light soft brush at the end, not such an obvious one, maybe. That's just me though. Really. You don't have to do anything about it if you don't want to. Typograhy has something to be desired also. I say remove the border. Nice work though. I like it overall. Cool fx work and really lovely stock choice.
Have to disagree with these guys, i think it looks great, something i would totally go for myself, gj hun
