First Sig In Awhile

This is the first sig I've made in probably a year now. C&C please so I can improve.

 

dont like the text

 

Hm. Thought I posted on this one. Guess I didn't.

I'm no fan of stroke on text, so take out the stroke. Other than that, it's not that bad for not having done anything for a long time. Maybe try and get more of a flow goin, and a light source.

 

overgriany on sides
but damn look good for a start

 

not bad the text could be better the effect u added to it is nice but the rest of it looks strange move it a lil to the right maybe. Also i think dd u blur or gaussan blur coz its a lil to shinny at the back..maybe reudce opacity.

 

Thanks for the comments guys I'll keep trying. Also the text was something I really struggled with are their any good tuts out there for text?

 

The render really ruins it, you'll need to pick better ones in the future. The colors are kind of plain, but its pretty good from coming back after a year. Gj