Quite nice. I think the typography could be better. The effects look nice but you need to draw to the focal a bit more and add some more depth IMO. I like the effects tho. I love the sharpening effect and the manipulation etc.
Good text, and nice effects, not bad the dull colours suit the strong light and compliment well. But i think a slimmer canvas to narrow the eye line when viewing would have set it OFF!. GW.
not bad it looks well nice but the text could be like a bit more viisble..it would look alot better. I like the effects near the actual render..I like how u sharpened it.