Work In Progress

Discussion in 'Large Artwork' started by tric, Mar 4, 2008.

  1. Mar 4, 2008 at 4:14 AM #1
    tric

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  2. Mar 4, 2008 at 2:38 PM #2
    tric

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    commenting.. ur doing it wrong! :)
     
  3. Mar 4, 2008 at 7:10 PM #3
    mjsmile

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    It's pretty good for a start imo.

    Maybe it's a bit too bright and add more flowers or things that fit your background.

    I think it will be schmexy. I like the text a lot. :-) <3
     
  4. Mar 4, 2008 at 7:16 PM #4
    wildsorrow

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    Why are you hiding your typography? Be proud of it! :D the light effects are too bright.

    Overall it needs more detail, but its going well.

    Don't ask what you can add. You are the artist. Add what you feel is right.
    It isn't my work so I won't tell you what to do in terms of content.

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  5. Mar 4, 2008 at 8:29 PM #5
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    It looks a tad bit repetitive... not a big fan of the text, but it's a good start. :)
     
  6. Mar 4, 2008 at 8:48 PM #6
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    too bright! I would comment more but it hurts my eyes :[
     

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