I like it. This kind of thing, in my opinion, doesn't need a big focal, epic point. It's like pop art. It doesn't need a focal to work. Nice, I like it.
but red is like evil lol. i uno , i think the theme suits red. sorry for being an ars about the cnc but just imho its better red.
i like but some of the colours are a lil messed up i dont knw there sumthing missing, i know u goijg for a different kinda effect but i dont knw sumthing stillmissing. I think its the guys face.
but in all your works you use topaz. at least lower it a bit because it's too obvious. imo, topaz should not be the first thing that come to the eye..