~ Lost Memories ~

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Any comments or suggestions are appreciated.

EDIT: Added a 2nd version.

 

9.5 / 10

i love the way the light shines on her and the bg! good job

 

sharpen main render
lacks depth and a bit simple not blended well

 

I like the concept, and I like what you've done with it so far, but it does feel a little incomplete.

 

Thanks for the comments guys.

 

same as above
well done

 

I agree but wasn’t really sure what to add and I didn’t want to make it messy or tacky.

Do you guys have any suggestions on what I could add or do differently?

 

Yea, add some depth

do a b&w gradient map, set it to luminosty

Apply image and take the burn tool, burn objects that seem far away from the focal to add more "focus" i guess

 

That I can do, thanks Fallen!

 

Ok, I added a second version. Any better or worse?

 

excellent lighting.
is that a grave yard in the background?
fab job mate you nailed the flow of this sig
9/10

 

Thanks bro I appreciate that.