too me i dont think the focal fiots in with the BG at all, its a sci fi render and so in theorie should be kept in a sci fi style sig :S, typo = too small :S sorry dude i dont like it on a brighter side V2 is better Arden EDIT: Actualy i am starting to warm to V2 its growing on me i dont know why but i like it!! but still the first one i dont like at all.
background doesnt fit at all imo maybe if u added some more stocks to blend with the renders colors slightly it would be better