Needs depth, and the text must be taken out. Colors are atrocious, no blending really involved. Contrast needs work, so does lighting.
Its great to see you're trying to do something different. (well its something ive never seen lol) The concept is great. The typography ruins it badly, I would remove it completely. The concept is great, but in my opinion, it needs a better render and background. The render, if I was you, should blend into the background and create better lighting effects. I would also get rid of the white rectangle at the bottom. If you want to add typography, choose a much better font and take more time into creating a text effect. I love your avatar btw. lol -
The title should be "an LP" and sorry, but I dislike this LP The style is unoriginal, and it was executed poorly the depth is off, the colors just aren't good, the text is bad, and the lighting is completely off in the way it was done and looks :/
It should be "an LP" . Just say it out loud and it should be clear >.> But i pretty much agree with everyone hear about the LP
yea I know its my 3rd lp ever and 1st of this style but "an lp" doesn't make sense. did this in microsoft word
How can you agree with everyone here when Buccaneer and I have 2 opposite opinions on his work lol "an lp" or "a lp" does it really matter? You don't win a prize for proving someone wrong lol I agree Buccaneer about it needing depth. -
