just made this one kinda like it btw its from the new upcoming game protype comments on it would be nice btw if u have some ideas for the left side pls do tell me im kinda out of ideas lol.
I'd leave the left side the way it is, looks really good I'd say it's better then your "My third sig + my best one".
Soo many effect C4Ds kinda a turnoff. Not much background detail, although I like the concept and how the flow of the effects point towards to focal point. Lighting is correct, and looks nice. The text is really bland and could be more creative. I like the color, a bit monotone, but it works. Nice job man, good effort.