Closer

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by W_O_L_F__Y, Feb 29, 2008.

  1. W_O_L_F__Y

    W_O_L_F__Y Well-Known Member

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    Well. The Idea for this signature came to me in a dream(Not really.) Ok, Well I was listening to 'Bleed the Dream- Closer'(Its a song, for you Old people/Hiphop lovers/People who live under a rock). And I started thinking about signature Ideas for this. So I got a stock, and went to work. like. 28 layers(More like 20, but i like to copy and make random layers that are un needed). C4D-less once again.
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    If you click on this, Please Post? I get lonely :( (Honestly, I'm mass posting this on many forums, I get like 50 Views, and 1 post. and thats my self bumping it) (EPIC FAIL EH?)
     
  2. wildsorrow

    wildsorrow Well-Known Member

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    Why the side bar on the left?
    Why the square cut out eyes?
    Why the drizzled out eyes above the image?

    It all seems unnecessary.


    And you wonder why you hardly get any comments??

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    The left bar seems out of place, but your text looks good
     
  4. W_O_L_F__Y

    W_O_L_F__Y Well-Known Member

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    yes, I still wonder why I dont get any comments, that is just the reason I made it, doesn't mean if you don't know what I'm talking about that you shouldn't comment on the signature its self. Those are clipping masks, I like them. as for the left bar, It will probably be removed soon.
     
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    Yup, I agree.
     
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    Agreed. Completely unnecessary.

    As for the tag:
    The elements are all a bit out of place. Clipping masks are alright, but not when its just eyes.

    I'd abandon the B&W one. Continue with the colored one. Add some texture and create an even flow. Up the contrast. Play around with the positioning and etcetera.
     
  7. W_O_L_F__Y

    W_O_L_F__Y Well-Known Member

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    Hmm, I think today, I'll do another just using Dave(right). But I'll take all of your ideas into consideration while I make it. Thanks for the feedback.
     
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    Oh by the way Tank. Maybe you can add a little bit of contrast too.

    I just noticed that lol

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