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Heres a new tag i made today, while my back was hurt form me falling down the stairs. lol...

 

I like it but I feel like the left side is to empty, you should try and add something there.

 

i agree maybe cut out alittle of the left side then it would look fantastic although i think besides that its great and i like the text but IS BEAUTIFUL is pretty hard to read try making it clearer .... but still very nice

 

nice work man

 

Colour FTW but it seems a little boring.

 

The coloured version is truly stunning.
Very nice work, although the far left is perhaps a bit too much emptiness...?

 

V2 is hawt

 

I agree with those who said V2 is better, its awesome. perhaps make the IS of the text more visable? The left is slightly empty.

 

One of the better tags you've made in a while imo.
Lighting could have been a little better, meh..

 

Am I the only one on this forum who actually like negative space ? It helps to get the focal point. Everytime I see a tag with some, there are always plenty of ''it's too empty'' kind of comments.

I like the b/w mate, wonderful composition but I'd get rid of the ''Beowulf'' text.

 

alright thx lol. And ya i like negative space too. But sometimes its not executed well.

 

I like V2 better. The lighting is decent and the use of negative space is good, if not a tad overdone (maybe cut out just a little of it). I'd also either get rid of the 'Beowolf' text or move it to another spot as it doesn't seem to fit where it is now.

 

Don't listen to anyone, its brilliant !!!!!!!

lol

The colour one is better.

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updated

 

Nah, ruined it with the third one now

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