My First Tag (halo One)

my first tag i made
some comments on it would be nice btw i kinda think its to brigt but i wanna read your comments (what you thnk of it)

 

That's great for your first.
Good compo and blending.
Just take a peek at a few tuts and blend them with your style .

 

thanx for the comment
i will take a look at the tuts.

 

great job for your first, text is the only thing really thats bad.

 

yeah i agree but i cant find some text tutorials lol
if u have some ideas about the text pls do tell me anyways thanx for the comment

 

Thats awesome for a first

 

Nice for your first!
You picked a great light source, and nice blending. :]

 

thats pretty hawt man! great job for your first attempt, and you know you can only get better
only suggestion for now is to watch and be careful you dont smother your render in effects, dont be afraid to show more of it ^_^

 

thanx for the comments guys specially u Daecu