First sig in a while tryed playing game to stop this mental block but i'm gonna try and make some more sigs and see if it helps. Be harsh, i need to learn
ok this sorta goes along the lines of "floating head" the lines in the background are too repetetive..and never cover up the render with em. the text and the black hole at the bottom right are on the same page ---distract from the focal. try and move the head over towards the middle and blend it in a little bit get rid of those lines and text and you'd have a solid sig follow a tut maybe to get out of the mental block always helps me. keep it up!