well i want to add some c4d effect like Ne0's unreal tournament sig dunno if u guys saw it those leaves are cool.. but for now its alright.. cnc thanks
Looks flat and plain. Needs more in the bg and some foreground effects, also, make sure the left flows w/the right.
left side is a bit plain, and the lighting is a little odd, I can see you tried to create your own shadows on the render, and from experience i want to say that altering the lighting direction on a pre-made piece is hard to do and keep clean, its better to play out the lighting thats already there ^_^ its looking pretty good so far, just do something with that left side and maybe work on coloring a bit more, good start :]
Good start, but it looks like you slapped on a render on top of two backgrounds. Use some of those 61 credits you have to buy a tutorial.