Assassins Creed B&w

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by .fallen, Feb 24, 2008.

  1. .fallen

    .fallen Well-Known Member

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    [​IMG]

    c&c please

    thanks:)
     
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    bry5012 Well-Known Member

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    looks good, but I prefer color....
     
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    Nice job. Stocks pixelated, maybe over sharpened?

    The lines to the right kinda make me cringe a bit, try and lose them?
     
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    heres the color version : [​IMG]

    i personally like the B&W more but everyone has their own taste:)
     
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    Nah the b&w is way better.Nice job on this.
     
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    I like the colored version more, but it seems a little bit over sharpened. Still a nice job on both tags.
     
  7. JL Rubidox

    JL Rubidox Well-Known Member

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    Like others said, it's oversharpened. You have you define the focal a little better. I had to actually look for it when I first saw the tag. You want it to really stand out. Try blurring the ides and BG a little. :)
     
  8. .fallen

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    heres a v2 : [​IMG]

    i blurred the bg a tad, and brightened it up to bring out some more effects, aswell as lowered the sharpening a tad
     
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    Version two looks a lot better. The text is really basic and the placement could've been a bit different if I were to do it. I don't like the background transition from Left to center, as it goes really soft and cringes to a rough set. I think if you were going for a bit more of a rough look to leave those smudges out.
     
  10. .fallen

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    anymore c&c?

    thanks:)
     
  11. wildsorrow

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    I don't see anything wrong with it lol

    Composition, depth, typography, it all goes well.

    Good job.

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    grainy
    too much going on
     

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