Nice job. Stocks pixelated, maybe over sharpened? The lines to the right kinda make me cringe a bit, try and lose them?
I like the colored version more, but it seems a little bit over sharpened. Still a nice job on both tags.
Like others said, it's oversharpened. You have you define the focal a little better. I had to actually look for it when I first saw the tag. You want it to really stand out. Try blurring the ides and BG a little.
heres a v2 : i blurred the bg a tad, and brightened it up to bring out some more effects, aswell as lowered the sharpening a tad
Version two looks a lot better. The text is really basic and the placement could've been a bit different if I were to do it. I don't like the background transition from Left to center, as it goes really soft and cringes to a rough set. I think if you were going for a bit more of a rough look to leave those smudges out.