I don't know if I like the lighting under his chin. It seems out of place. I like the colors and text, but the depth could use work.
I have to say i don't like it very much =\ The typo ruins it, aswell as the checkers and crown, they don't fit t he stock. Loooks exetremely flat, try and do some burning and blurring to fix that. But the lighting fits well, kinda overpowering but it helps out much. Its nice, just not really my type, great colouring btw.