Couple Of Halo Sigs~

heres one i made just recently:


and heres 1 i made a few days ago:


comments please

 

1st - the perspective is a tad off, and when i try to look at it at an appropriate perspective, my neck starts to hurt. the random blue effect c4d looks very odd because it does not go with the rest of the color scheme. depth looks decent although it could be better with a little burning around the lighting source to create more depth. the lighting is a tad washed out, as are the colors around it. effects / distortations to the left of the focal dont really go, and the text doesnt go either.

2nd - alot better then the first imo. nice colors, the red actually goes with the black / grey and white. text looks decent, because it does not ruin the depth, which this tag is lacking. could use a lighting source and better compo imo...

 

i like them both good job

 

first one's better. Smudge bg needs work imo.

 

thanks for the comments fellas and the detailed CnC almost

 

i like them both, but i like the first one better

text needs work on both.. colors need work in the 2nd

good work

 

1st
except for typo
this tafg is like wtf hotness
10/10

2nd meh

shuld def current 1st w/o typo