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looks different if u look thru it on image shack because of the black... cant be seen on this dark forum -_-

 

take the regular render and put it on the top i think. i really like the sharp stuff coming of the endges of it all but
the rest looks like you just Filter>art>sketch or w/e it is.
i'd also make it a bit bigger if ur gonna use the torn border. it makes ur workspace really small.
i like the idea tho

 

sharpen

 

is this better?

 

The second one is definitely better. I'd still try to bring out the render a little bit more.

 

if i sharpen it more it looks weird i tried

 

v2 is much better, try adding some more lighting to bring out the render

 

ok thanks will do

 

yep the 2nd is heaps better, i think it needs abit more effects/detail though.. looks abit plain at the moment. but nice work