It seems like the brightness is too high, or it's oversharpened. I'd also make the glow on the text one or two pixels larger, if you can.
good job on this one, the sparkle brushes kinda kill the strong terminator look of it though good job mate
Yeah the sparkle brush is misplaced. Maybe open a new canvas > Fill with black using the paint bucket tool > Set opacity to 40 ( Around there ) > Copy it to the tag and there, you have a darker tag.