My First Realism

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by steez, Feb 22, 2008.

  1. Feb 22, 2008 at 7:29 PM #1
    steez

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  2. Feb 22, 2008 at 10:12 PM #2
    steez

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    come on, people :[
     
  3. Feb 22, 2008 at 10:17 PM #3
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    I think the position of the stock doesn't look right, if it was more centered it think it would look better.

    Good try for a first though.
     
  4. Feb 22, 2008 at 10:22 PM #4
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    yeah what he said ^^^ and the render seems very LQ
     
  5. Feb 23, 2008 at 2:48 AM #5
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    she definitely looks out of place compared to the stock.
    shes lit up when the bg makes it look like she should be dark
    i would try a brighter background with that render
     
  6. Feb 23, 2008 at 11:19 AM #6
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    too dark
    2 focal points -= no imo
     
  7. Feb 23, 2008 at 11:44 AM #7
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    nice concept,but it would look better if you shift the render to the left just a little bit,and adjust your lighting to match.still,not bad for a first attempt
     
  8. Feb 23, 2008 at 12:19 PM #8
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    minor adj and be great....good start!! keep em coming as they are looking good
     

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