Dark City

ok well i started off totally diff but it turned out nice imo

cnc plz

btw: the background was all custom didnt even mean it but turned out cool

 

The signature doesn't flow very well, try moving up the render a bit. maybe add a little be of contrast/lighting? not even going to talk about the text.

 

work more effects....good start, now follow up with more detail....

 

too choppy no flo

 

bleh w/e lol it was late at night looked good to me ill fix it alittle maybe

 

here is a total reconstructed version

cnc plz

blah its ok..
i dont like it too much

just tell me wat to fix and ill keep tryin till it looks good

 

like the newer version better, u just need to put some of the effects over the render instead of under so it doesnt stick out too much.. lighting could could a lil work too try render > lighting effects > spotlight or whatever looks good.. also the background is good but needs some more detail as in.. a nice c4d, smudging, spatter brushes or whatever comes to mind anyway nice work mate

 

thnx im getting there only been doing for about 2 weeks btw i like ur sig looks nice


here hows this?

 

work on building up a bg by using the render itself, make multiple copies and spread em around to fill canvas then smudge em a tad thenmerge em together and add a filter like wave or ripple then give it hit with blur 1 time see what ya get...

 

bg, text, and render, none of them match at all.

 

ok ill work on a new 1

 

thats abit better, gave it a lil bit of depth anyways and the text turned out nice and thanks you'll be heaps better then those in no time though

 

agree

 

Thanks all for responses i only been workin on sigs 2 weeks i have improved alot but there is alot more to improve on and i will in time.